The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on buying game
softwares
, Correct your spelling
software
CDs
and DVDs, as well, in a period of 4 years globally (from 2000 to 2004).
looking at the chart, Use synonyms
it is clear that
both games and videos experienced an upward trend during the whole period, Linking Words
whereas
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CDs
saw a steady state of Use synonyms
being sold
during these years.
At the Verb problem
sales
begining
of the period, Correct your spelling
beginning
Use synonyms
CDs
sales stood at about 35 billion dollars, which was by far the most sold item, which Change the noun form
CD
remaied
almost the same in the next three following years. The revenue from games was only about 15 Correct your spelling
remained
billions
per year in 2000, experiencing an upward trend and Change to singular
billion
peaked
at roughly 18 Wrong verb form
peaking
billions
in 2003.
Change to singular
billion
It is clear that
the money earned from selling DVDs has a much more significant upward trend as opposed to the other two categories, from almost 18 to 32 Linking Words
billions
in 2000 and 2003 respectively.
Change to singular
billion
However
, Linking Words
CDs
account for the most of money which was earned with a slight variation worldwide.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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