The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007
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The given map provides extensive data regarding the alteration of Petland, a coastal town, in two different time periods from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
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, the
road
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was extended along a
yacht
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marina
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and between houses and other multiple facilities were added. A closer scrutiny of pictures reveals that a sea which was in the south was replaced with a
yacht
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marina
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and new apartments were constructed in the east-south of the
yacht
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marina
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.
Next,
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many shops were set up on each side of the
road
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.
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, an industrial area was displaced with a swimming pool and a multi-storey car park which was
with
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one storey and in the east of the wider
road
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built. There was
also
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a park developed in the west of the
yacht
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marina
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. Turning to the south side, the cinema was erected in a territory which was an empty space beforehand.
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, houses were assembled
in
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on
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each side of
newly
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the newly
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extended
road
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,
instead
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of grassland.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, yacht, marina with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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