The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below pie charts illustrate the alterations in spending by a certain UK school per year in three different years, 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
, teachers’ payments was
the biggest Change the verb form
were
portion
in
annual spending and Change preposition
of
it
increased each year. It is interesting to note that other workers’ Correct pronoun usage
they
salaries
had a downward trend.
In 1981, Teachers’ earning was the biggest portion
among
all spending Change preposition
of
by
40 Change preposition
at
percent
. Other workers’ Change the spelling
per cent
salaries
was
second Change the verb form
were
portion
byb
just below a third and resources and Correct your spelling
by
furnitur
and equipment had Correct your spelling
furniture
same
Change the article
the same
portion
by 15 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Proportion
of insurance was negligible.
By Add an article
The proportion
turn
1991, teachers’ Verb problem
apply
earning
and resources spending rose Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
and
50 and Correct word choice
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
fifth
Correct your spelling
fifty
percent
of total spending was allocated Change the spelling
per cent
these
Change preposition
to these
cost
. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
On the other hand
, cost
of furniture and other workers Correct article usage
the cost
reduced
by 20 and 5 Add a missing verb
was reduced
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Cost
of insurance had no significant change. In 2001, teachers’ Correct article usage
The cost
salaries
, resources, and other workers’ salaries
Add a missing verb
were resuced
resuced
and reached Correct your spelling
reduced
rescued
to
just below a half and a fifth and exactly 9 Change preposition
apply
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
repectively
.Furniture Correct your spelling
respectively
cost
increased considerably and reached Fix the agreement mistake
costs
to
over a fifth. 8 Change preposition
apply
percent
of total spending was allocated to insurance.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers’, portion, salaries, percent, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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