Nowadays, no doubt advertisement plays an important role in most of the business models. In recent years, to step out from adversaries, enterprises shifted their attention away from research and development, they started to
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more and more on the innovative side of their
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with
this
development.
This
statement will be analyzed by bringing up the topic of deceiving
advertisements
, and the shortening product life cycle tendency that
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recently.
Firstly
,
advertisements
are often misleading and triggering, and yet, not illegal. They usually
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in the grey areas, where the responsibilities are
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.
For example
, certain companies would exaggerate
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and effects to induce consumers into buying. In
this
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the upgrades from the previous version.
While
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been renovated, but might just have only slight differences in performance.
Thus
,
advertisements
can
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customers in some circumstances, and
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.
Secondly
,
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have found a new way of making profits, which is shortening the life cycle of the
products
. The more
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one buys, the more earnings companies have. What’s worse,
this
tendency
also
results in environmental issues. As you might heard before, “fast fashion” is one new term in the fashion industry which indicates people are constantly looking for new items and can easily throw away the old ones to embrace the new ones. As soon as the industry observed
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their best to grasp the chance.
However
,
this
business model leaves an enormous amount of clothes that are bought and thrown away without environmental considerations
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and leads to a ridiculous amount of
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. In short words,
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world with
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in
products
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to
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the planet.
To sum up
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the positive impacts. Companies should put focus on real progress and improvements rather than
advertisements
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fake
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.
Also
. It is crucial to take climate change into consideration
while
deciding marketing plan.
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actively by oneself, there is no better way to understand by your own eyes.