In this technological era, personal information is stored on computers by many companies and organisations

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this

modernization

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day, with the advancement of technology, personal

data

is stored on computers or clouds. Some argue that

this

information can be leaked illegally by companies and

organization

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while

some think that it can make life easier and the world safe. From my point of view, I think

this

development

bring

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more benefits than its disadvantages.

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has been a great invention since it first appeared in the late 20th century. It is widely popular that people store their information on the clouds.

However

, one drawback could be that

this

data

is hacked which leads to the loss of money kept in online banking accounts.

For example

, my credit card was hacked

few

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months ago and I lost 10 million VND.

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the end, fortunately, I could take my money back after

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to the bank.

On the other hand

, one reason why keeping personal

data

on the

clouds

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or computers is advantageous is that it is easier for people, especially for those who are forgetful, to sign in to many different sites without remembering accounts and

password

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. It is very secure as it needs people’s

face

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or

fingerprint

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to authenticate.

Hence

, it creates a

seemless

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experience and

reduce

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time.

Moreover

, another benefit could be using online payment methods

such

as e-wallets and Apple Pay to purchase goods without physical cards. It could reduce crime rates in big cities.

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, information

that

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stores

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in authority computers can help close criminal cases.

For example

, an image of a thief extracted from a CCTV can help the police know who the crime is. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the advantages of storing personal

data

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more than its disadvantages. It can make

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world a better place.