The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different

sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons with relevant.
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information on the changes
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the energy produced from different sources in a
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between 1985 and 2003. In general,
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the two maps reveal a complete
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migration
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slowly, Natural gas Coal and other renewable increase
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. Hydrogen Steadiness. Looking at the map in more detail, the data for other renewable rose Slowly between 1% and 4% from 1985 to 2003. During the period natural gas
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iconsiderably
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from 18%
1985
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to 2003 between 13% and 23%. It can be seen from the pie
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coal
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rose
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from 8% to 13%. During the period
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from
1985 to 2003. there was a decrease in Oil
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52% to 39%
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million
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. What's more,
Nuclear
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from 229 in 1985 to 17% in 2003 .
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celebrated
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costancy
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constancy
gradua
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gradual
at 4% and
remainted
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remained
between 1985 and 2003.
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