The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The shown pie
given
information on the changes Wrong verb form
gives
of
the energy produced from different sources in a Change preposition
in
centery
between 1985 and 2003.
In general, Correct your spelling
century
cemetery
It is clear that
the two maps reveal a complete teans
for Correct your spelling
trend
mation
from Oli and Nuclears Correct your spelling
migration
decrease
slowly, Natural gas Coal and other renewable increase Fix the infinitive
to decrease
slight
. Hydrogen Steadiness.
Looking at the map in more detail, the data for other renewable rose Slowly between 1% and 4% from 1985 to 2003. During the period natural gas Change the word
slightly
increase
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increased
iconsiderably
from 18% Correct your spelling
considerably
1985
to 2003 between 13% and 23%.
It can be seen from the pie Change preposition
from 1985
chast
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chart
coal
rose Correct pronoun usage
that coal
slight
from 8% to 13%.
During the period Change the word
slightly
feam
1985 to 2003. there was a decrease in Oil Correct your spelling
from
for
52% to 39% Change preposition
by
milion
Units highest values in Correct your spelling
million
pie
Correct article usage
the pie
chaet
. What's more, Correct your spelling
chart
Nuclear
downward trend Correct article usage
the Nuclear
significant
from 229 in 1985 to 17% in 2003 . Add a missing verb
was significant
Additionally
Hydrogen celebeated
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celebrated
celebrate
costancy
Correct your spelling
constancy
gradua
at 4% and Correct your spelling
gradual
remainted
between 1985 and 2003.Correct your spelling
remained
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