Instructions Read the question below and write an essay dealing with Advantages and Disadvantages.
You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.
Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan.
Only then attempt to write this essay. Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company.
And give your own opinion.

During and after

COVID

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the COVID

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pandemic, a large

amount

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number

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of

companies

made

workers

to

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apply

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work

at

home

. Some people think that

this

discouraged employers and

therfore

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therefore

had negative impacts on

companies

while

others highlighted the advantages of doing jobs from

home

. In my opinion,

benefits

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the benefits

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this

new trend of working

had

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has

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brought to

companies

are greater than loss.

This

essay will evaluate both sides of virtual working. Some argue that working individually at

home

discourage

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discourages

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employer's will to

work

because of

environment

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the environment

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they are working.

Companies

are designed to allow co-

workers

to

work

collaboratively with an adequate amount of anxiety and competition to efficiently achieve

a

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the

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goal

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goals

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of the

companies

.

Therefore

, when

workers

are not in

this

specific environment, it is unsure whether they can perform well or not in other places. For me, it was hard to focus on studying at

home

compared to a library or a school, where many people compete and study at the same

time

because there were no means

that

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to

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motivates

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motivate

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me to study.

On the other hand

, it can

also

be said that working from house

let

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lets

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workers

to

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apply

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allocate

time

more efficiently. As

time

goes by, the purpose of using

company's

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a company's

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building is disappearing.

For instance

, colleagues

in

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at

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Google

work

wherever they want to in the building and their working hours

is

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are

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not fixed, but flexible. These can be carried out at

home

as well.

Therefore

,

workers

do not necessarily have to go to

a

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the

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main building of

companies

. Rather, they can use commuting

time

on doing

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to do

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jobs that are helpful for

companies

.

To sum up

, the new way of working - virtual working, both have good and bad aspects.

Nonetheless

, I think that

positive

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the positive

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impacts that

companies

can expect

is

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are

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much greater than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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.