You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. Write a job application letter and say: • How did you hear about the company • What skills and qualification do you have • Why do you want to work there

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Dear Mrs.Kamila I hope

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email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well.I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the position of a full-time job being accepted as a member

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your

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. The intention of revealing

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statement shows that

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I seeking an opportunity to work as

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and manager in your international

company

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which is cooperating with Germany,Britain,Turkey and Korea.I have heard about your

company

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on television and searched for the information on the internet.As I have seen

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company

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is very prestigious and meets my standards.

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,I decided to apply for a job. It is obvious that I have a strong background in leading the staff and translation.My work experience is

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of 15

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years,7 years in

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position,

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years in

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position.I can easily communicate with foreigners in German,English,Korean,Russian and French languages.I am eager to be a part of your

company

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Thanks

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you for considering my request.I am looking forward to replying to you soon.

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faithfully Shaxrizoda.

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Task Achievement

Consider providing more specific information about how your skills and experiences make you uniquely suited for the role at the company.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clarity and stronger impact, such as one paragraph for how you found the company, another for your qualifications, and a final one for your desire to work there.

Writing Tone

Good job on maintaining a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.

Task Response

You successfully addressed all parts of the prompt in a clear and organized manner.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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