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Band 5.5

You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. Write a job application letter and say: • How did you hear about the company • What skills and qualification do you have • Why do you want to work there

#company #work #job #application #skills #qualification
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Dear Mrs.Kamila I hope
this
 email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well.I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in the position of a full-time job being accepted as a member
in
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 your
company
. The intention of revealing
this
 statement shows that
,
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apply
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I seeking an opportunity to work as
translator
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a translator
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 and manager in your international
company
 which is cooperating with Germany,Britain,Turkey and Korea.I have heard about your
company
 on television and searched for the information on the internet.As I have seen
this
company
 is very prestigious and meets my standards.
As a consequence
,I decided to apply for a job. It is obvious that I have a strong background in leading the staff and translation.My work experience is
totally
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15
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 years,7 years in
management
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a management
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 position,
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and 8
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years in
translation
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a translation
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 position.I can easily communicate with foreigners in German,English,Korean,Russian and French languages.I am eager to be a part of your
company
Thanks
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 you for considering my request.I am looking forward to replying to you soon.
Your
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 faithfully Shaxrizoda.
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Task Achievement
Consider providing more specific information about how your skills and experiences make you uniquely suited for the role at the company.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clarity and stronger impact, such as one paragraph for how you found the company, another for your qualifications, and a final one for your desire to work there.
Writing Tone
Good job on maintaining a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.
Task Response
You successfully addressed all parts of the prompt in a clear and organized manner.
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