Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, • Tell him/ her about your flat. • Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.
Dear John,
How are you? I
hop
you and Evi are doing well. It’s very exciting to hear that you are coming to stay at my home.
First of all, I want to tell you some information about my house. It is an Correct your spelling
hope
eight floor
apartment located at 156 Yilin Avenue, with public facilities including a gym, a yoga hall, Add a hyphen
eight-floor
two
swimming Correct word choice
and two
pool
that can be used for free. Meanwhile, there is a shopping Fix the agreement mistake
pools
center
nearby, which is a blessing for you who enjoy shopping.
Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, in order for you to have a happiness
experience, there are some notes that you need to understand and pay attentionReplace the word
happy
.
Change preposition
to.
Firstly
, the apartment gate will close at 12 pm, so sure
to carry the key with you. Add a missing verb
be sure
Secondly
, the yoga studio is usually open on weekends and require
a reservation in advance. Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
In addition
, you can use all the items in my apartments.
Finally
, I am looking forward to your arrival, my best friends. I extremely you can feel at home here during my vacation.
Yours Lovelovelove,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter flows smoothly by linking ideas and paragraphs more clearly. Transitional phrases could help make the connection between different sections more evident.
language
Double-check spelling and grammatical structures for minor inaccuracies to enhance clarity and precision in your writing.
task achievement
To further elevate your task response, consider adding more specific details or personal touches about your apartment or the surrounding area to create a more vivid and engaging description for your friend.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend, and you've successfully addressed all parts of the task.
coherence cohesion
You organized your letter into paragraphs, each with a clear purpose: describing the flat, giving instructions, and providing advice for problems.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,