The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
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and the financial expenses of the United Kingdom (UK)'s police officers in 2017-2018. There was a slight increase in all the aspects included, reaching 318.6
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in total in 2018, higher
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304.7
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in 2017 for around 14
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. The government from the state contributed to the highest proportion among
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three categories,
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for almost 178
pounds
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in 2018, 0.3
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pounds
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higher than in 2017. For the pie charts, there was a higher need for
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technology expenditure comparing 8% in 2017 but
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raised 6% to 14% in 2018.
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was an increase percentage on the technical usage, the largest proportion
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money expenses remained, which was the salaries of policemen. At the same time,
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expenses for buildings and transports were the same in two consecutive years,
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for 17%.
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