The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
Overall
, the given table reflected
the Wrong verb form
reflects
orgins
and the financial expenses of the United Kingdom (UK)'s police officers in 2017-2018. There was a slight increase in all the aspects included, reaching 318.6 Correct your spelling
origins
organs
pounds
million
in total in 2018, higher then
304.7 Replace the word
than
pounds
million
in 2017 for around 14 pounds
million
. The government from the state contributed to the highest proportion among other
three categories, Correct article usage
the other
account
for almost 178 Wrong verb form
accounting
pounds
million
in 2018, 0.3 million
pounds
higher than in 2017.
For the pie charts, there was a higher need for the
technology expenditure comparing 8% in 2017 but Correct article usage
apply
then
raised 6% to 14% in 2018. However
, even there
was an increase percentage on the technical usage, the largest proportion Correct word choice
though there
in
money expenses remained, which was the salaries of policemen. At the same time, Change preposition
of
infrastructures
expenses for buildings and transports were the same in two consecutive years, Change the noun form
infrastructure
account
for 17%.Wrong verb form
accounting
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