Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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students

study

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studying

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at

university

, there are variety of

subjects

can

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that can

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select

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be selected

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. Whether

students

should spend more time drilling their

core

subjects

or learn from elective

subjects

based on their own

interest

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interests

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had

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has

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become a hot controversy.

Firstly

,

university

students

should receive knowledge by their

interest

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interests

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.

University

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The university

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is not a vocational training council. Teenagers should

allow

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be allowed

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to pick the subject which is

intersting

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interesting

for them. Especially, all-rounded development

had

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has

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been encouraged in current society.

For instance

, I studied

in

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apply

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food science during

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my bachelor

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bachelor

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bachelor's

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degree. I have

chose

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chinese

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history as my elective subject. It

induces

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induced

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my

interested

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interest

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in Mao Zhe

Dong

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Dong's

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life and discover

the

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a

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common topic with

father

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my father

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. It has

boarden

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broadened

my

horizon

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horizons

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which let me know more about the

root

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of China.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that

studied

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studying

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your own interest areas in

university

is totally reasonable.

On the other hand

, it is crucial to stay

focus

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focused

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while

studying

in

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for

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qualification.

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Taking

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place in professional

study

is never a simple task. Sometimes, they are

monitor

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monitored

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by their council and requesting they need to keep improving their qualification. So, they need to spend most of their effort on time-consuming

core

subjects

.

However

, keeping a balance is playing an important role to succeed.

For instance

, I have a friend that are

study in

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studying

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dentistry. He

is requires

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is required

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to have

examination

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an examination

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every year. As we all know,

study in medical

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studying medicine

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have

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requires

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tremendous knowledge need to be familiar

with

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apply

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but he

still

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was still

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able to learn instrumental music and history during his studies. So, professional

students

spend

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spending

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time to learn their interests is achievable. In conclusion, despite the fact that some people suggest it is important to

give

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spend

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all time studying

in

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apply

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core

subjects

. Positive outcomes of

study

in additional

subjects

are clearly more than drilling hard in

core

subjects

.