The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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in the UK after graduation in 2008 who prefer to have part-time work, voluntary work, unemployment, and

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study.

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continue their studies to achieve a higher degree. In 2008, the number of graduate pupils was totally greater than postgraduate pupils.

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Topic Vocabulary:

academic pursuit
temporary employment
voluntary work
further studies
part-time work
full-time employment
data representation
statistical comparison
post-educational paths
job market
unemployment rate
career advancement
skill development
lifelong learning
employment sector
vocational training
economic trends
workforce participation
career aspirations
higher education

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages fir young people who decide to do this.

In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With the increased use of computers, the Internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office every day. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree

19. The professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than the sports and entertainment stars or personalities. Do you agree or disagree?