The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart compares the female participation rates and the viewership rates within the 16 to 25 age group in 6 different types of sport in an unidentified country by the year 2000.

Overall

it is clear that

this

country there tend to be more females watching sports than those who play them, excluding badminton and golf.

While

tennis was the most observed by women, basketball had the highest number of female athletes and horse riding was the least by both means. In terms of viewing , among selected sports, tennis was the most popular one for women to watch with 60%. With slightly lower at 55%, ranking in second place was basketball. The other four recorded games ,

on the other hand

, were much less common for young females to watch. The highest among them was gymnastics with 20%, as twice as golf watchers with 10%. Contrastingly, the least popular female spectators were badminton, horse riding and racing, with merely 5%. Regarding the figures for females who participate in sports, basketball had the highest amount of young female athletes with 50% of sportswomen from 16 to 25 years old engaging in

this

activity. The second highest of all were tennis and golf with 30% of female participants each.

Moreover

, there were more young women who

play

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badminton than those who

participate

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participated

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in gymnastics, with 12% and 9% respectively. Female racers and horse riders,

however

, were the least among the selected type of game athletes with only under 5%.

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demographics
participation rates
viewership
temporal trends
societal attitudes
barriers to entry
female athletes
notable discrepancies
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