The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of people in Uk in 2004

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percenatge

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percentage

of expenditure on three categories

food

and

drinks

,

restaurants

and

hotels

and

entertainment

among different

age

groups of

people

such

as

under

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those under

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30, 31-45, 46-60, 61-75 and above 76 in 2004 in

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the Uk

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Uk

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UK

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.

Overall

, the

spendings

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spending

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on

food

and

drinks

were

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was

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very high in all

age

groups except the

people

who are under 30. The money spent on

food

and

drinks

and

entertainment

was very high in

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with other leisures. The

people

whose

age

is more than 76 spent almost 23% of their income on

food

and

drinks

and 14% on

entertainment

whereas

the individuals who are under 30 spent their money more on

restaurants

and

hotels

almost 15% rather than

food

and

drinks

and

entertainment

. The

people

who

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apply

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aged 31-45 spent almost equal part of

money

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their money

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for

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on

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all activities, approximately 14% on

food

and

drinks

and

restaurants

and

hotels

and 8% on

entertainment

.

Moreover

, the

age

group between 61 to 75

expand

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expanded

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20

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by 20

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% on

food

and

drinks

and

entertainment

and 2-3%

on

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in

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restaurants

and

hotels

.