The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of people in Uk in 2004
The bar graph illustrates the
percenatge
of expenditure on three categories Correct your spelling
percentage
food
and drinks
, restaurants
and hotels
and entertainment
among different age
groups of people
such
as under
30, 31-45, 46-60, 61-75 and above 76 in 2004 in Correct pronoun usage
those under
Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
. Correct your spelling
UK
Overall
, the spendings
on Fix the agreement mistake
spending
food
and drinks
were
very high in all Correct subject-verb agreement
was
age
groups except the people
who are under 30.
The money spent on food
and drinks
and entertainment
was very high in compare
with other leisures. The Replace the word
comparison
people
whose age
is more than 76 spent almost 23% of their income on food
and drinks
and 14% on entertainment
whereas
the individuals who are under 30 spent their money more on restaurants
and hotels
almost 15% rather than food
and drinks
and entertainment
.
The people
who
aged 31-45 spent almost equal part of Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
Correct pronoun usage
their money
for
all activities, approximately 14% on Change preposition
on
food
and drinks
and restaurants
and hotels
and 8% on entertainment
. Moreover
, the age
group between 61 to 75 expand
Wrong verb form
expanded
20
% on Change preposition
by 20
food
and drinks
and entertainment
and 2-3% on
Change preposition
in
restaurants
and hotels
.Submitted by maliksheetal32 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drinks, restaurants, hotels, entertainment, age, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
▼