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In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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In the present world, countries are constantly competing to lead the world.
Consequently
, some might seek
growth
 in economic or
finanacial
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financial
 industries, and even consider them as
first
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the first
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 priority to gain more power. Meanwhile, the other dimensions which
has
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 the same importance are often overlooked. It
is disagreed
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disagrees
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 with
this
 non-comprehensive policy, and it will be analyzed by discussing the core value of the
goverment
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government
 and some consequences
of
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only
caring
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 economy could lead us to.
Firstly
, in the long history, leaders
are
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 created to stand out and take care of every citizen in their territory. Nowadays,
goverments
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governments
government
stands
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 for the same purpose.
As a result
, it is the authorities' responsibility to not only focus on specific
group's
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groups
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 of benefits but
also
 look after the minorities.
For instance
, civilians with lower income or special financial conditions should be granted
with
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more
resoucres
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resources
 and
helps
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. It is important to provide
a different levels
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different levels
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 of assistance
according to
 respective situations.
Thus
, It is needed to remind the governments from time to time what
do
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they serve for.
Secondly
, there is
no thing
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nothing
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 that comes with no cost.
As in
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this
 case, I would say the consequences that economic
growth
 brought
has
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have
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 impacted strongly to our environment.
For example
, China has been
arising
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rising
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 drastically in
economical
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 numbers.
However
,
according to
 recent reports, China
are
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also
 responsible for over a quarter of the total
emmision
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emission
last
 year. It is not worth it when we sacrifice our one and only planet with our greed.
Therefore
, it seems that the contamination has already
outweigh
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 the
growth
.
To sum up
, even though
growth
 always comes with prosperity and
thriveness
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thrives
, it is still important that the authorities should never forget: it is their core mission to offer
supports
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in
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anytime
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 to anyone in need.
Moreover
, environmental impacts are
also
 one factor
requires
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that requires
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 a second thought when drafting policies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritizes
  • economic growth
  • employment opportunities
  • public services
  • tax revenues
  • infrastructure development
  • environmental degradation
  • industrial expansion
  • income inequality
  • wealth accrues
  • neglect
  • social issues
  • metrics
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