In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the present world, countries are constantly competing to lead the world.

Consequently

, some might seek

growth

in economic or

finanacial

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financial

industries, and even consider them as

first

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priority to gain more power. Meanwhile, the other dimensions which

has

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the same importance are often overlooked. It

is disagreed

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with

this

non-comprehensive policy, and it will be analyzed by discussing the core value of the

goverment

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government

and some consequences

of

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only

caring

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economy could lead us to.

Firstly

, in the long history, leaders

are

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created to stand out and take care of every citizen in their territory. Nowadays,

goverments

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governments

government

stands

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for the same purpose.

As a result

, it is the authorities' responsibility to not only focus on specific

group's

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groups

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of benefits but

also

look after the minorities.

For instance

, civilians with lower income or special financial conditions should be granted

with

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more

resoucres

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resources

and

helps

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. It is important to provide

a different levels

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of assistance

according to

respective situations.

Thus

, It is needed to remind the governments from time to time what

do

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they serve for.

Secondly

, there is

no thing

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that comes with no cost.

As in

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this

case, I would say the consequences that economic

growth

brought

has

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impacted strongly to our environment.

For example

, China has been

arising

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rising

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drastically in

economical

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numbers.

However

,

according to

recent reports, China

are

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also

responsible for over a quarter of the total

emmision

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emission

last

year. It is not worth it when we sacrifice our one and only planet with our greed.

Therefore

, it seems that the contamination has already

outweigh

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the

growth

.

To sum up

, even though

growth

always comes with prosperity and

thriveness

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thrives

, it is still important that the authorities should never forget: it is their core mission to offer

supports

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in

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anytime

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to anyone in need.

Moreover

, environmental impacts are

also

one factor

requires

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a second thought when drafting policies.