The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagrams illustrate the process of
cement
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production
along with
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how to produce concrete from
cement
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.
Overall
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, there are 5 main stages commencing with the crushed limestone and clay being mixed prior to heating, grinding, and ultimately packaging.
Additionally
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, the concrete will be manufactured by mixing key materials
such
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as
cement
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, water, sand, and gravel.
Initially
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, the limestone and clay are crushed and converted into powder.
Then
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the powder goes through the mixer and rotating heater in order to be heated for a
while
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.
After
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this
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stage is complete, the powder undergoes the grinding stage which is continuously ground into
cement
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and is ready for packaging. Turning to concrete production, before not only the sand which is made up 25% but
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the gravel ( 50% ) is put into the concrete mixer, the
cement
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,
as well as
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the water, accounted for 15% and 10% poured into the mixer, respectively.
Finally
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, through ample blending, concrete is made out.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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