The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement- making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
picture illustrates the process of how cement
is made and how cement
produces concrete for building construction.
Overall
, we can see four distinctive stages that each represent a part of the cement
-making process, and the last
stage is about concrete production.
Firstly
, some kind of stone powder is created by crushing clay and limestone. Secondly
, the powder is moved by a mixer device into a rotating heater; in this
part, a smooth matter is made. Thirdly
, cement
is caused by a grinder and is put in some bags.
In this
stage, which is the last
stage, concrete is produced by 15 percent
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per cent
cement
, a tenth of water, more than 25 percent
sand, and a half of gravel, which Change the spelling
per cent
is
small stones. All of these ingredients are mixed by a concrete mixer.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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