The chart below show average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities

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by people in

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the UK

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four different

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

139 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

time allocation
gender differences
daily activities
employment patterns
traditional gender roles
domestic chores
caregiving
leisure activities
hobbies
sports
entertainment
self-care
societal roles
gender equality
equitable responsibilities

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The chart below show average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people say that, art and drama are as important as other school subjects especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?