The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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picture below depicts the process of electric generation by geothermal energy. As observed from the diagram, there are 5 general steps
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in
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process. The first step involved cold
water
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pumped down into
injection
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an injection
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well and the final step is
generator
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a generator
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powered by
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the turbine
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to
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electricity. Based on the provided picture, the process
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with pumping down cold
water
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from the reservoir, into the injection well. The depth of
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the injection
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itself is about 4.5 km.
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the
water
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heated by the geothermal energy of the hot rocks in
geothermal
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the geothermal
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zone and
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into the production well section. When the
water
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temperature increases, it will pumped up from the production well to
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the condenser
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. In
condenser
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a condenser
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, the hot
water
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converted
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is converted
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into steam, which
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is used
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to
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the turbine. The kinetic energy of
turbine
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the turbine
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would converted into electricity by
generator
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the generator
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.
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, the electricity can be distributed for use.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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