The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The bar charts illustrate information about the percentage of desktop

owners

during

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from

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2002 to 2010(2002, 2004, 2006, 2008 and 2010). The second one expresses their 5 levels of study of

degree

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the degree

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of the

owners

, including absent of

highschool

degree, graduated in the

highschool

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high school

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level,

unsuccessed

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successes

in college, Bachelor’s degree and Postgraduate qualification, at the beginning year(2002) and the

last

year(2010) of observing.

Overall

, it is noticeable that both graphs show the increasing trends during

this

8 years

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8-year

period. Focusing more on the first chart, the

computer

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number of computer

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owners

increased

5

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by 5

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percents

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percent

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per

each

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apply

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period, starting from 55

percents

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percent

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in 2002 and

end

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up

with

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at

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75

percents

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percent

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in 2010. Turning to the second graph, there

are

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is

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also

in

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apply

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the

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an

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increasing trend of people who own

the

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a

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computer.

Furthermore

, in the lower education levels(ungraduated from

highschool

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high school

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and in the

highschool

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high school

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level), the data reveals that there were twice more of the

owners

in 2010 compared to the year 2002.

However

, there

were

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a

slightly

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slight

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increase in the higher levels of study which is around

20

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a 20

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percents

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percent

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increased

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increase

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.