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Compared to the past, people can now work in places that are far from their homes because of modern means of transportation. How has this affected the lives of workers? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having modern transportation. Support your answer with specific reasons and example.

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Relatively to previous decades, the majority of
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 has been increasingly working in circumstances that
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 require
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 of time for various range of professions and employment types, there are possible causes
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why that
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 the case. Primarily, the integration or adoption of better modes of transportation like advanced metro
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, city wide bus lines that even connect with
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the outskirts
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 of some cities providing a reliable , efficient and rapid system of
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 to and from the respective companies, firms
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or institutions
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 for their associated employees and workers. It can certainly help them overcome range anxiety and facilitate a means of avoiding
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occasional
 traffic congestion problems in an alternative sense
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for example
 using cars can amplify
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 issue compared to other types of conveyances, these are one of the
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 benefits that one can come across. A negative or less beneficial
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 would be the broad implication on worker and employee health with the advent of
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 modern locomotive structures in place,
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 exacerbates concerns regarding as aforementioned, physical health which has made
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 lazier with periods dedicating them to
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working
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 harder have significantly reduced, a probable solution to
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 would be to incorporate more healthy lifestyle practices and programs in
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individuals
 work-life balance.
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Task Achievement
Be sure to directly address the question by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of modern transportation on workers' lives. It's essential to clearly state these impacts from the introduction to guide your reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more effectively and improve the flow of your essay. This will help in making your argument more coherent and easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Including more specific examples and elaborating on how modern transportation directly affects workers’ lifestyles and work practices would strengthen your argument and offer a more comprehensive response.
Coherence & Cohesion
A concluding paragraph summarizing the main points and restating your position would enhance the overall structure and provide a clear closure to your essay.
Language Use
Good use of topic-specific vocabulary related to transportation and employment.
Task Achievement
An attempt was made to discuss the impact of modern transportation, indicating an effort to address the task.

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