The graphs give data about proportions of the results of a research at a new shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand

The pie chart illustrates the fraction of reactions from users who are using a new Auckland shopping mall in New Zealand. Comprising of satisfaction, very satisfaction, dissatisfaction and no comment.

According to

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the figures,

it is clear that

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most of the people who are coming to use the department store are satisfied.

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, there are some of them that are expressed in different ways. Just under two-thirds of folks using the new city mall are satisfied and 17% of them are very satisfied.

On the other hand

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, the number of dissatisfactions and no comments from the shoppers are nearly the same which is 11% and 10% respectively.

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Apr 18, 2024

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