Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should therefore be stopped. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indeed
fact
that every individual Should have to do Add an article
a fact
the fact
work
to live life without facing any problems. However
Certain mankind think
that Change the verb form
thinks
nation
Should only Proffer Correct article usage
the nation
jobs
to local People
Fix capitalization
people
instead
of foreign People
. I Partially disagree with this
statement and uphold my point of view in upcoming Paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason which aid
me to stay in my thinking is quality Correct subject-verb agreement
aids
work
. In simple words, some Workers
have great skills
and have ability
to Change the article
the ability
Proffer
Verb problem
Produce
top
quality Correct word choice
apply
work
which can enhance the growth of nation's
economy. Correct article usage
the nation's
For instance
, country
like India which wants to develop excellent Add an article
a country
road
, Fix the agreement mistake
roads
therefor
It Correct your spelling
therefore
require
good machines which can be operated only by foreign Change the verb form
requires
People
and have Skills
to operate it perfectly Correct article usage
the Skills
instead
of native workers
.
Another Point which can not be Overlooked is learning new skills
as well as
techniques by foreign people
to enhance work
of native Correct article usage
the work
People
. A native people
can learn the way of working of other country
Change the wording
another country worker
other country workers
worker
, this
can be taken as example
of learning new Add an article
an example
Skills
. Furthermore
, a worker
of
Change preposition
from
other
Correct quantifier usage
another
nation
has the
extra ability which can not Correct article usage
an
be find
in local Change the verb form
be found
worker
, Fix the agreement mistake
workers
this
can aid many company
Change to a plural noun
companies
as well as
nation
.
On the flip side, numerous humans are against Fix the agreement mistake
nations
to provide
Change the verb form
providing
jobs
to the people
of foreign people
. The only reasor
behind Correct your spelling
reason
this
statement is, they think Other country's worker
can create unemployment for native Fix the agreement mistake
workers
People
. However
, in some case
Fix the agreement mistake
cases
to provide
Change the verb form
providing
jobs
to foreign worker
is Fix the agreement mistake
workers
aidful
because he Correct word choice
helpful
had
Wrong verb form
has
that
Correct determiner usage
those
skills
.
To sum up
, bringing foreign workers
can not affect the jobs
of local workers
as well as
can not create any problems.Submitted by akshayashvi07 on
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