The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data presented in the pie charts delineate the distribution of
water
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resources allocation for various purposes across six countries worldwide.
Overall
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it is clear that
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agricultural usage predominates in four out of the six states.
Conversely
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, industrial and domestic utilization is most prevalent in three distinct regions, respectively.
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with,
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allocation for agricultural purposes exhibits a substantial percentage exceeding 70%. Central Asia stands out as the primary consumer of
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for agricultural activities at 88%, trailed by Africa at 84%,
South East
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Southeast
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Asia at 81%, and South
America
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at 71%.
By contrast
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, North
America
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and Europe allocate just under 50% of their
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resources for agricultural use, with figures of 39% and 32%, respectively.
In contrast
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, industrial and domestic
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consumption percentages are lower than those for agriculture. Europe leads in industrial
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utilization at 53%, followed by North
America
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at 48%, and South East Asia at 12%.
Conversely
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, domestic
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usage is highest in South
America
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at 19%, followed by Europe at 15% and North
America
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at 13%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "conversely".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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