The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a

neighbouring town, since 1962.
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The Map above presents the different developments happening within three subsequent time periods,
also
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showing two settlements in seemingly closer proximity to each other. So,
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in 1962, there is the presence of a village and a town side by side and a railway line passing through the latter area
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the former region is linked by some form of an undeveloped road. Coming to the next image following the previous one, we see more development and expansion , two roads constructed, one running straight to Fonton linking it with the village
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another runs through the meadow side developing on an earlier trail , there is a presence of a housing estate , leisure complex to the east of
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very infrastructure, on the south there is a new super store . in the current timeline, we see the development of a hotel, a station linked to a railway line, and
further
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south there is a business park connected to the previous road.
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