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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europ

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europ
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The provided tables depict the data concerning the
sales
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 of Fairtrade-certified coffee and bananas in five European nations: the UK, Switzerland,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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, in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it can be observed that all five countries sold more coffee in 2004 compared to 1999.
However
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,
this
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 trend was consistent in three out of the five countries, excluding
Sweden
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 and
Denmark
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, when it came to the banana trade. With regard to coffee
sales
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, the UK led the
sales
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 in both years, recording 1.5
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and showing a significant growth to 20
million
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euros
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 in 2004. Switzerland followed suit, reporting 3
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and
then
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 reaching 6
million
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euros
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 in 2004.
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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 secured the subsequent positions, with
sales
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 ranging from 800,000
euros
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 to 1.8
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and from one to two
million
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euros
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 in 2004. In terms of banana
sales
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, Switzerland dominated the list, generating 15
million
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euros
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 in banana
sales
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 in 1999.
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 figure reached an impressive 47
million
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euros
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 in2004, thereby maintaining Switzerland’s
position
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 as the leading country. The UK stood in the second
position
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 in both years, achieving 1
million
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euros
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 in 1999, which was
also
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 substantially higher in 2004 with 5.5
million
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euros
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. Notably, Belgium’s 2004
sales
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 witnessed a significant boost in value to 4
million
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euros
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, elevating the country to the third
position
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 in 2004, displacing
Denmark
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, which occupied the lowest spot on the list with
sales
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 worth 900,000
euros
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.
Sweden
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 maintained its fourth
position
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 in 2004, with
sales
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 totalling 1
million
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euros
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.
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