The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram explains how to recycle from man-made processes. And the process goes in a circle. which

glass

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can be recycled many times.

First,

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The

glass

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was trashed in the recycle bin by people.

Then

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, the treatment plant separates the waste from trash to prepare to the recycle.

Next,

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the Man in the treatment plant washes and sterilizes the

glass

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in the machine. That, it must have a clean before the next process. Next step, the clean

glass

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is crushed and melted by the machine. the most

glass

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melts in one to reform in the next part. When it is ready to

mold

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mould

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Then

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molding

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moulding

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in the machine to shape something.

Finally

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, many shapes from recycled

such

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as bottles or

glass

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are delivered by a man again. which is delivered to the supermarket, and after that people re-use and trash something to trash. It can be recycled again by man in the treatment plant.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
recycled
stages
collection
waste glass
sources
bottles
jars
windows
transported
recycling facility
sorted
color
processes
cleaned
impurities
labels
caps
crushed
cullet
raw material
melted
furnace
temperature
molded
new glass products
distribution
consumers

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