The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps depict the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. The first map
was about two
hundred years ago and the second is now.
Now, there is a new Lenton
housing estate near Lake Lenton
which in the past had Lenton
wood but recently cut down and repeated by housing. In addition
, there are two
new residential including business and shopping replacing housing areas in the past. At the same time, In the west of the map
is a new main railway station extending from north to south of the map
. The railway crosses the river Twine and replaces the Twine toll bridge and the railway replaces all of the fields in the southwest of the map
. Meanwhile, In the north of map
the Lord Westley's Houses was replaced by The Red Lion and Lenton
Hotel.
But, two
facilities have in the same area similarly
such
as market square and Town hall.Submitted by phatkhunnok on
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