The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the average
proportion
of unhealthy breakfasts, lunches, dinners, and snacks that consist of 3 different ingredients, namely sodium
, saturated fat, and sugar
. The data were measured in percentages. Overall
, there were different proportions in each meal. It was interesting to note that sodium
had the highest and also
the lowest proportions for meals
.
Looking at the sodium
pie chart, meals
for dinner had the highest percentage (43%) of total sodium
, followed by lunch, 29 percent
of the total. Change the spelling
per cent
While
breakfast and snack meals
get the same proportion
, under 15%. Meanwhile, the ingredient for the saturated fat chart for dinner consists of 37% of the total fat. The lunch meals
,
contained 26% fat. For breakfast and snacks, 21% and 16%, respectively.
Turning to the Remove the comma
apply
last
chart, added sugar
, the proportion
of sugar
for snacks had the highest proportion
(42%). Followed by the dinners, which consist of 23% of the total sugar
. For lunch, had slightly under a fifth, while
for breakfast contained 16%.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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