The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the average
proportion
of unhealthy breakfasts, lunches, dinners, and snacks that consist of 3 different ingredients, namely Use synonyms
sodium
, saturated fat, and Use synonyms
sugar
. The data were measured in percentages. Use synonyms
Overall
, there were different proportions in each meal. It was interesting to note that Linking Words
sodium
had the highest and Use synonyms
also
the lowest proportions for Linking Words
meals
.
Looking at the Use synonyms
sodium
pie chart, Use synonyms
meals
for dinner had the highest percentage (43%) of total Use synonyms
sodium
, followed by lunch, 29 Use synonyms
percent
of the total. Change the spelling
per cent
While
breakfast and snack Linking Words
meals
get the same Use synonyms
proportion
, under 15%. Meanwhile, the ingredient for the saturated fat chart for dinner consists of 37% of the total fat. The lunch Use synonyms
meals
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,
contained 26% fat. For breakfast and snacks, 21% and 16%, respectively.
Turning to the Remove the comma
apply
last
chart, added Linking Words
sugar
, the Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
sugar
for snacks had the highest Use synonyms
proportion
(42%). Followed by the dinners, which consist of 23% of the total Use synonyms
sugar
. For lunch, had slightly under a fifth, Use synonyms
while
for breakfast contained 16%.Linking Words
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