The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts show the average
proportion
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of unhealthy breakfasts, lunches, dinners, and snacks that consist of 3 different ingredients, namely
sodium
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, saturated fat, and
sugar
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. The data were measured in percentages.
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, there were different proportions in each meal. It was interesting to note that
sodium
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had the highest and
also
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the lowest proportions for
meals
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. Looking at the
sodium
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pie chart,
meals
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for dinner had the highest percentage (43%) of total
sodium
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, followed by lunch, 29
percent
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per cent
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of the total.
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breakfast and snack
meals
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get the same
proportion
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, under 15%. Meanwhile, the ingredient for the saturated fat chart for dinner consists of 37% of the total fat. The lunch
meals
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,
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contained 26% fat. For breakfast and snacks, 21% and 16%, respectively. Turning to the
last
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chart, added
sugar
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, the
proportion
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of
sugar
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for snacks had the highest
proportion
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(42%). Followed by the dinners, which consist of 23% of the total
sugar
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. For lunch, had slightly under a fifth,
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for breakfast contained 16%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, sodium, sugar, meals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
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