You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in the property management position opened at the Kannef

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apartment. I believe that I will be a good fit for

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position. I am

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an MBA

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gruated

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graduate

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and my education consists of two Co-ops

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I am happy to share that

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got placements for both of my Co-ops in

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estate industry. I have worked with some of the most renowned real estate brokers, mortgage agents and property managers.

Addiontally

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Additionally

, I am planning to become a

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property dealer and manager. I have cleared

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1 examination and preparing for

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exam. I will use the best methods to my knowledge for the smooth

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functioning

of the aforementioned site if got selected for

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role. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sameer Rana

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Task Achievement

Consider using more specific examples of your relevant experience to demonstrate your suitability for the role.

Coherence and Cohesion

Review and correct minor spelling errors (e.g., 'gruated' should be 'graduated', 'addiontally' should be 'additionally', 'licesned' should be 'licensed', 'functioninig' should be 'functioning').

Coherence and Cohesion

To enhance coherence, try connecting your paragraphs more smoothly by using transitional phrases.

Task Achievement

You clearly stated the purpose of your writing and outlined your suitability and approach to the position, fulfilling the task requirements effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing were appropriately formal, matching the tone of a professional letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

135 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain about. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some college freshmen find that the courses they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be c compulsory part of high school programme(for example working for charity ,improving the neighbourhood, teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?