The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates data about the
families
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family's
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income expenditure based on eight different
criterias
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criteria
in two different years.
It is clear that
,
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there is a significant difference between the amount of money spent in 1968 with that of 2018. In the year 1968, food was the most consumed expense
whereas
in 2018, it
got
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reduced to almost half of the amount.
Next,
is leisure expenses, almost 25 per
cent
of weekly income was allotted to
this
activity in the year 2018.
On the other hand
, below 10% per
cent
was given for
this
in 1968.
In contrast
, fuel and power hold the least amount of money spent in both years. It was about 4 to 7 per
cent
respectievely
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respectively
.
Houseold
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Household
goods show a
consistant
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consistent
constant
rate in both years that was about 7 per
cent
.
Susequently
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Subsequently
, transport, clothing and footwear
also
has
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a minor deviation.
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