The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates data about the
families
income expenditure based on eight different Change noun form
family's
families'
criterias
in two different years.
Correct your spelling
criteria
It is clear that
,
there is a significant difference between the amount of money spent in 1968 with that of 2018. In the year 1968, food was the most consumed expense Remove the comma
apply
whereas
in 2018, it got
reduced to almost half of the amount. Verb problem
was
Next,
is leisure expenses, almost 25 per cent
of weekly income was allotted to this
activity in the year 2018. On the other hand
, below 10% per cent
was given for this
in 1968.
In contrast
, fuel and power hold the least amount of money spent in both years. It was about 4 to 7 per cent
respectievely
. Correct your spelling
respectively
Houseold
goods show a Correct your spelling
Household
consistant
rate in both years that was about 7 per Correct your spelling
consistent
constant
cent
. Susequently
, transport, clothing and footwear Correct your spelling
Subsequently
also
has
a minor deviation.Change the verb form
have
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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