The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates data about the

families

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family's

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income expenditure based on eight different

criterias

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criteria

in two different years.

It is clear that

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there is a significant difference between the amount of money spent in 1968 with that of 2018. In the year 1968, food was the most consumed expense

whereas

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in 2018, it

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reduced to almost half of the amount.

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is leisure expenses, almost 25 per

cent

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of weekly income was allotted to

this

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activity in the year 2018.

On the other hand

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, below 10% per

cent

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was given for

this

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in 1968.

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, fuel and power hold the least amount of money spent in both years. It was about 4 to 7 per

cent

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respectievely

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respectively

Houseold

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Household

goods show a

consistant

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consistent

constant

rate in both years that was about 7 per

cent

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Susequently

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, transport, clothing and footwear

also

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has

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a minor deviation.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

144 words

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