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of young
people
in high positions
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states
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increasing. Some
people
are satisfiesChange the verb form
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this
action
while
, some
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are unhappy in
this
case.
This
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To begin
with, some
people
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generation
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a place in a high position. They believe that a young person has an updated mindset which can be useful if,
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in any
.
Therefore
,
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young
people
are
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the present
era
and know how to cope with today's situation
while
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theyCorrect your spelling
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old
people
have old
that in
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era
those
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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mostly useless. For
, if we consider a
man
in
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era
, even
heCorrect word choice
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cannot use
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imagine how he would control a country.
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the dorsal side, many
people
claim that high positions are not for young
people
.
are
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as politics is
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game they will
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due to
lack
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In addition
, an adult guy is full of emotion in comparison
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an old
man
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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,
beingCorrect word choice
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emotional is not a good point in policy.
Besides
,
educationCorrect article usage
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of an old
man
higherAdd a missing verb
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than an adult
for example
, a
twenty two years oldCorrect your spelling
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guy only can have a bachelor
while
a
man
can have several PHDS.
In conclusion, some
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of society
welcomeChange the verb form
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particepatingCorrect your spelling
participating
participation
young-generation
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high
at the same time a significant number of
people
disagree with
this
trend.
According to
denoted points in
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essay and owing my personal idea it
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to give chance
to Change preposition
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young
people
to take
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part in
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.