The line graph gives data on the proportion of children respects to the total young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001. The proportion of children are categories in four age groups.
The graph compares four distinct
age
categories based on the percentage of children to the overall
juvenile population in UK
between 1990 and 2001.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, the percentage of the children experienced different trends over the given periods. While
the age
group
of 10-14 witnessed a consistant
surge from the lowest to the highest point, the 0-4 Correct your spelling
consistent
constant
age
category plunged, making their rank change, from the second to the last
rank in 2001. On the other hands
, the other categories saw Fix the agreement mistake
hand
a dramatic fluctuations
.
Started with about 26% in 1991, the Correct the article-noun agreement
dramatic fluctuations
a dramatic fluctuation
group
of 0-4 age
saw a small rise to approximately 26.5% in 1992 before falling steadily until it reached a low of roughly 23.5% in 2001.
The figure for 5
-9 Correct article usage
the 5
age
group
began from just nearly 25% in 1990 and grew significantly to a little over 26% in 1997, then
it dropped gradually to the
just over 25 in 2001.
Correct article usage
apply
By contrast
, the group
of 10-14 climb
Wrong verb form
climbed
continuosly
from just above 23% to more than 26%, Correct your spelling
continuously
surpassed
the Wrong verb form
surpassing
group
of 0-4, 5-9, and 15-19 in 1992, 1995, and 1997, respectively.Submitted by msdedew10 on
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