In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

Today the vast majority of

people

want

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working

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have to leave their

home

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homes

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and leave their friends and relatives. In my opinion,in

this

question

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advantages

outweighs

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the disadvantages and

i

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I

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am going to prove it. On the one hand,

leave

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leaving

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your motherland can give you opportunities to live independently and gain valuable experience,especially when you are

student

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a student

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. Chances like

learn

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learning

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foreign

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a foreign

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language,deep into

antother

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other

culture

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cultures

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and

find

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finding

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international friends can promote

to

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you to

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achieve

your

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apply

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success and attain your dreams.

For example

,many

people

from Central Asia move to Russia

for working

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and

learning

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learn

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foreign

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a foreign

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language and culture and most of them do that and have good wages and jobs.

Therefore

,

the

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summarize

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summarising

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all

this

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factors can bring more benefits than

drawbacks

.

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,moving abroad

have

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potential

drawbacks

,

such

as apathy,depression and certainly homesickness.

This

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These

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mental issues can lead to

have

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less motivation for work,

lose

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loss

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your confidence,and

become

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thinking of returning to the homeland. Most of the international students,who mixed their study and job faced with these problems,which can provide

drawbacks

.

However

, these challenges can test them and help them in the future,where they will solve any problems and will not have any problems with acclimatization.

Hence

,regardless

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of this

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this

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this drawback

these drawbacks

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drawbacks

they can promote themselves in the future through mistakes that have made now.

To sum up

, many

people

going

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go

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abroad

for working

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to work

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and studying and

here

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there

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is

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are

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advantages and disadvantages,where

people

have

desire

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the desire

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to work hard and attain their goals and be successful in their careers,

however

,the main

drawbacks

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drawback

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is

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are

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the

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apply

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mental issues,which can lead to

have

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having

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unsatisfactory outcomes in the work and desire to come back to home. In my opinion,

benefits

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the benefits

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outweigh the

drawbacks

.