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the line graph shows the sales figure for bananas imported to four countries from 1996 to 2004

the line graph shows the sales figure for bananas imported to four countries from 1996 to 2004
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The given line graph depicts the total
amount
 of bananas imported from four countries during the
year
 1996 to 2004.
Over all
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Overall
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, in the
year
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years
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 1996 to 2004 all
the
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four
countries
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countries'
country's
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bananas
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banana
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 prices
had
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showed high fluctuations. The USA remains constant and
showed
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shows
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limited
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a limited
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amount
 of
price
 variations respectively. Meanwhile, Japan had the highest sales rate of 3
USD
 per
kg
 in the
year
 1998, with a major fall
by
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of
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 2
USD
 per
kg
 in the
year
 1999. Eventually, Japan
had shown
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showed
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 fluctuations over 2.5
USD
 to 2
USD
 in the following years to reach the
least
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lowest
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amount
 of bananas
price
 to 1.5 in the
year
 2003.
However
, France showed
steady
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a steady
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 pricing range with the
amount
 of sales not surging more than 2
USD
 per
kg
 in the upcoming years.
Furthermore
,
German
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Germany
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 started
with
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at
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 1.5
USD
 per
kg
 and plunged to 2.5
USD
 per
kg
 within a period of one
year
and
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apply
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with a sudden drop of 2.5
USD
 to 1 to 1.5
USD
 by the following
year
.
This
 showed the same fluctuating
price
 range as Japan. The USA maintained its
price
 when compared to
other
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the other
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 three countries.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, year, price, usd, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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