The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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bar chart illustrates the Linking Words
percentage
of individuals who bought or rented a house in two countries, Wales and England from 1918 to 2011.
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it is clear that
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percentage
of owners increased dramatically ,Use synonyms
while
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percentage
of renters decreased substantially over the period given.
In 1918, the number of household renters was roughly 80 Use synonyms
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per cent
however
, it went down slightly and stayed stable until 1953, it was 70 Linking Words
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per cent
Also
, we can see a considerable plummet over the years 1961 and 1991, in 2011, Linking Words
moreover
, the Linking Words
percentage
had a gradual rise and turned to approximately 40 Use synonyms
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For household owners it was the complete opposite, in 1918, it was a little above 20 Use synonyms
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per cent
then
in 1939, it was above 30 Linking Words
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percent
and stayed unchanged until 1953. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, it went up significantly over the years 1961 and 1991, after that, the numbers were almost the same Linking Words
in
1991 Change preposition
from
till
2001Change preposition
to
,
and fell slightly in 2011.Remove the comma
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