The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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This
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bar chart illustrates the
percentage
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of individuals who bought or rented a house in two countries, Wales and England from 1918 to 2011.
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,
it is clear that
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the
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of owners increased dramatically ,
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the
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of renters decreased substantially over the period given. In 1918, the number of household renters was roughly 80
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,
however
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, it went down slightly and stayed stable until 1953, it was 70
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.
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, we can see a considerable plummet over the years 1961 and 1991, in 2011,
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, the
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had a gradual rise and turned to approximately 40
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. For household owners it was the complete opposite, in 1918, it was a little above 20
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in 1939, it was above 30
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and stayed unchanged until 1953.
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, it went up significantly over the years 1961 and 1991, after that, the numbers were almost the same
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1991
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2001
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and fell slightly in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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