The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
This
bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of individuals who bought or rented a house in two countries, Wales and England from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
percentage
of owners increased dramatically ,
while
the
percentage
of renters decreased substantially over the period given. In 1918, the number of household renters was roughly 80
percent
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,
however
, it went down slightly and stayed stable until 1953, it was 70
percent
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.
Also
, we can see a considerable plummet over the years 1961 and 1991, in 2011,
moreover
, the
percentage
had a gradual rise and turned to approximately 40
percent
. For household owners it was the complete opposite, in 1918, it was a little above 20
percent
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,
then
in 1939, it was above 30
percent
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and stayed unchanged until 1953.
However
, it went up significantly over the years 1961 and 1991, after that, the numbers were almost the same
in
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1991
till
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2001
,
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and fell slightly in 2011.
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