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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart presents the percentage of components of Gross Domestic Product in the UK for eight years,
start
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 from 1992 until 2000.
Overall
,
IT
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the IT
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industry
contirbute
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contributed
 more
for
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 the UK's GDP rather than
service
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industry
 since 1992. We
also
 can see that the percentage of
service
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industry
are
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 getting higher every year.
Meanhwile
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Meanwhile
,
IT
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the IT
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industry
 goes fluctuate. In detail,
IT
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industry
reach
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their
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 peak
on
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 2000 by contributing about 14
percent
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for
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 the UK's GDP and
service
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the service
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industry
got
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gained
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 8
percent
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per cent
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 in the same year. IT
industry
 decrease
on1996
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in on1996
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 but
then
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 far
on
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 1998 until it
reach12
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reached 12
percent
. In
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contrast
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, both
IT
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industry
 and
service
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the service
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industry
 were
in
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at
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 the lowest point
on
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in
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 1992
where
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when
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its
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 only can reach around 6
percent
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per cent
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 and 4
percent
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per cent
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 during the period.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words industry, service, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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