The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table above
show
the amount of Change the verb form
shows
medals
won by the ten different countries
in the London 2012 Olympic games
.
The table is Capitalize word
Games
rank
by the Wrong verb form
ranked
number
of gold
medals
the countries
won, therfore
, the United Correct your spelling
therefore
states
is on the 1st place because it won the most Capitalize word
States
gold
medals
. The United states
Capitalize word
States
also
won the most silver medals
and the most total number
of medals
. Some coutries
won more total Correct your spelling
countries
number
of medals
but still
in a lower place because they have fewer Add a missing verb
are still
gold
medals
than other countries
. For example
, Russia has 82 medals
won in total, while
the
Great Correct article usage
apply
Britian
has only 65 Correct your spelling
Britain
medals
won in total. But the
Great Correct article usage
apply
Britian
won 29 Correct your spelling
Britain
gold
medals
while
Russia won 24 gold
medals
, so the ranking of Russia is 1 behind the
Great Correct article usage
apply
Britian
.
Correct your spelling
Britain
To conclude
, the table show
the Change the verb form
shows
number
of different types of the
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apply
medals
won by the top ten countries
in the London 2012 Olympic games
, with the United Capitalize word
Games
State
Fix the agreement mistake
States
be
the 1st one.Wrong verb form
being
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, countries, number, gold with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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