The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the percentages of different industries, which influenced the finances of Brazil in the years 2009 and 2019,
as well as
the predictions for 2029.
Overall
, it is evident that the
finance
sector had a superiority over others and the less profitable sector was
food
production during a given period.
Furthermore
, apart from
finance
, each industry's share
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the
overall
economy will decrease. Looking into detail, as regards the past, in 2009,
finance
accounted for 30% of the whole revenue of the country, which was three times as high as
food
processing. The tourism sector was responsible for a quarter of the financial revenue,
as well as
the traditional resources,
such
as oil, coal, and gas,
while
20% of the profit came from manufacturing. After ten decades, the proportions of
finance
,
food
, and energy sources increased,
whereas
manufacturing and tourism went down steadily. It is projected that
finance
will be responsible for 40% of
overall
income. Tourism, manufacturing, and
food
processing will witness a decrease of 20%, 5%, and 10%, respectively. There will be a 5% decline in terms of industry of oil, coal and gas in 2029.
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