Government of developing country should spend more on projects (eg new tourist hotel, factories) to improve local economy and less on facilities (eg health and education) To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that

the

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developing countries should invest more

on

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tourism

and industrial sectors to boost the

economy

and reduce the money injected into basic facilities

such

as

healthcare

and

education

. I completely disagree with the statement because even though expansion in

tourism

bussiness

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business

and industry

bring

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in a lot of revenue to the

nation

, the states should prioritise health and

education

because it will increase the value of the citizens and it will benefit the

nation

in

long

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term. Industrial sectors and

tourism

undeniably contribute a lot to the

nation

's revenue

for example

like

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Vietnam that famous as

tourist

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a tourist

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attraction and expanding textile industry,

however

, one must value the importance of health and

education

. If developing countries want to move forward as developed

country

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countries

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, they should have tip-top

healthcare

facility

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facilities

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and

able

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be able

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to provide free schools to their people as

basic

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a basic

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necessity. For

instace

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instance

, as

developed

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a developed

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nation

, New Zealand is able to provide free services for sick people all around the country and still thinking of improving their services to

next

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level. Funding

on

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academic facilities and primary care should be emphasized to upgrade the

nation

's value. By having good schools and

tertiery

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tertiary

education

, the state can produce many

professional

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professionals

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to contribute to the

nations

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nation

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in many fields

such

as

economy

,

healthcare

, engineering, banking and many more.

In addition

, good health services

important

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to reduce the incidence of

non communicable

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disease

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that could impact the

economy

negatively. In

conlusion

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conclusion

, even if the

economy

might

benefited

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from expansion in

tourism

,

healthcare

and

education

should be the priority because they are the basic

necessity

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necessities

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in the world and they will contribute

the

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nation

in the future.