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The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender

The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender
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The chart reveals the number of comparisons by men and
women
 as a mobile phone user in Marysville in 20-year periods, from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that both genders started at a similar amount of subscribers,
while
 females are slightly higher than men.
Moreover
, they both increased and reached a different stop. Another interesting
point
 is that there was a year
point
 where they grew to the same
point
.
Initially
, at the beginning of the period, the number of men, using mobile phones was 500, and it sharply rose to around 2500 which reached the same
point
 as
women
 in 2005.
Moreover
, the figure remained stable in 5-year periods
,
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 and reached a peak at about 2800
at the end
 of the period.
Subsequently
,
women
 who made a subscription for a mobile phone in 2005 were above 500
,
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 and increased dramatically, and reached a high in 2005 of 2500 subscribers.
In contrast
, 5 years ahead
women
 users were moderately reduced to above 2000
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 and remained stable until 2015.
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