The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
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The given table compares the features of
railway
networks, including opened date, length and the number of passengers
in six cities.
Overall
, the three oldest systems, in London, Paris and Tokyo have longer routes and larger passengers
per year than the three in Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles
The oldest and longest railway
in six cities is London’s, opened
in 1863, at 394 Correct pronoun usage
which opened
kilometers
. Railway
systems opened in Paris in 1900 and in Tokyo in 1927. Tokyo and Paris are
the highest numbers of Verb problem
have
passengers
per year, at 1,927 and 1,191 respectively. Their length of routes both less than 200 kilometers
.
It is noticeable that the last
two railway
networks are Kyoto and Los Angeles. These two networks also
have the shortest routes, at 11 and 28 kilometers
respectively, and are used by the smallest number of Change the spelling
kilometres
passengers
annually, at 45 and 50 million respectively. Compared with mentioned above, the length of railway
in Washington DC is relatively long, at 126 Correct article usage
the railway
kilometers
and has a relatively large yearly passenger Change the spelling
kilometres
numbers
, at 144 million.Correct the article-noun agreement
number
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