You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers In your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion, Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter because, recently I have read an article in the daily JUNG, which is in your kind control. According to
the article towns in
all over the country are the same. I think the writer does not have enough knowledge about the topic and never travels to gather reliable information.
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Furthermore
, I would like to add that every town
has its own dynamics which vary from city to city. So how could he analyse and write about it without knowing real facts.
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?
Moreover
, If I talk about my town
, It has a huge population as compared to other cities . It has a great infrastructure and has a prominent role in Add an article
the economy
economy
building of the country. It might have some issues which made Replace the word
economic
these
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this town
these towns
town
less important than others.
I will be available any time if you and your team wish to visit my town
and see with your own eyes what I describe in this
letter.
I hope you consider my concerns.
Yours Faithfully,
KunwarSubmitted by computersinn2007 on
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Task Achievement
Ensure to directly address the points mentioned in the task, such as agreeing with some points of the article before moving on to disagreements and suggestions.
Task Achievement
Provide more specific examples or details when explaining how your town differs, to strengthen your argument and make your letter more convincing.
Coherence and Cohesion
Utilize a range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to enhance clarity and the flow of information throughout your letter.
Language
Consider revising for minor grammatical errors and improving sentence structure for clearer expression.
Engagement
Engaged with the topic in a personal and direct manner, which makes your letter engaging.
Task Achievement
The offer to give a guided tour of the town was a thoughtful and effective way to support your argument.