You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers In your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion, Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter because, recently I have read an article in the daily JUNG, which is in your kind control.

According to

the article towns

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all over the country are the same. I think the writer does not have enough knowledge about the topic and never travels to gather reliable information.

Furthermore

, I would like to add that every

town

has its own dynamics which vary from city to city. So how could he analyse and write about it without knowing real facts

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Moreover

, If I talk about my

town

, It has a huge population as compared to other cities . It has a great infrastructure and has a prominent role in

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the economy

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economy

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building of the country. It might have some issues which made

these

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this town

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town

less important than others. I will be available any time if you and your team wish to visit my

town

and see with your own eyes what I describe in

this

letter. I hope you consider my concerns. Yours Faithfully, Kunwar

Submitted by computersinn2007 on Mon Apr 22 2024

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Task Achievement

Ensure to directly address the points mentioned in the task, such as agreeing with some points of the article before moving on to disagreements and suggestions.

Task Achievement

Provide more specific examples or details when explaining how your town differs, to strengthen your argument and make your letter more convincing.

Coherence and Cohesion

Utilize a range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to enhance clarity and the flow of information throughout your letter.

Language

Consider revising for minor grammatical errors and improving sentence structure for clearer expression.

Engagement

Engaged with the topic in a personal and direct manner, which makes your letter engaging.

Task Achievement

The offer to give a guided tour of the town was a thoughtful and effective way to support your argument.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ubiquitous
homogenized
historical landmarks
monuments
festivals
unique atmosphere
independent businesses
traditional crafts
commercialized
hidden gems
town planning policies
distinct identity
cuisines
cultural diversity

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