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you ordered a book for exam preperation. It has been sometime since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to thecompnany about this. Describe your purchase order of the book explain the importance of the book Say what you want the company to do for you

#book #exam #preperation #thecompnany #purchase #importance #company
Dear Sir , I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that the
book
 I
have
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purchased from you
last
 month has not been delivered yet. Would you be so kind
to
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 check with your delivery company? On the
webiste
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website
, it shows " Dispatch " status but I still
havent
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haven't
 received it yet. The
book
 I bought from your website is " Slave " by Nazi Mandi . I am going to have to give the presentation of that
book
 which I was assigned by my professor for my journal reading . Time is ticking and I only have two weeks left for preparation. That presentation is very important as it gives the 40 % of the whole
accessment
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assessment
. That
book
 is not available in our school library .
That is
 why I have to buy it from you. I have attached my payment receipt
in
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this
 letter for your reference. . Tomorrow , I am going to British Museum
for
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 do some
reaearch
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research
 on the slavery era with my
collegues
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colleagues
. Would it be possible if I could come to your shop and collect the
book
 by myself ? I would be so
greatful
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grateful
 if you could help me in
this
 way . For the
book
 from the delivery service , you could cancel it or I could do the same thing if the company contact me. If there
is
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 delivery cancellation fees , please do not
hestitate
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hesitate
 to inform me . I will
definately
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definitely
 reimburse you for everything . Please let me know if I could come around. I am looking forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully , Sandi Mya Hla
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, transitions between ideas could be smoother, ensuring a more seamless flow of information.
presentation
Ensure appropriate punctuation and spacing, particularly around punctuation marks for a more polished presentation.
suitable writing tone
Consider rephrasing sentences that may seem too informal or colloquial for the context of a formal letter.
structure
The letter has a clear structure, with an opening, body, and closing that aids in readability.
content depth
Efforts to detail the situation, including mentioning the book's title and its importance for your studies, helps in achieving a complete response.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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