The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in

Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The chart clearly shows that there are two genders mentioned
that is
male and female were studied full-time and part-time education in the
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
show examples
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
1970s-1991s.
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