The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in teo separate years.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in teo separate years.
The pie
chats
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below indicate the energy production resources
such
, Coal, Gas, Petro,
Nucler
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nuclear
and Others in 1995 and 2005. The
measurments
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measurements
are with
percentage
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. In both years Coal has
highest
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usage
while
,
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Others
has
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the lowest usage.
To begin
with, in 1995 Coal was on the top with 29.80 percent
then
in 2005 had a small rise reaching 30.93 percent. In 1995 Gas was second most used with 29,63 and in 2005 had a gradual growth reaching 30.31. In 1995 Petro was third most used with 29.27 percent but in 2005 had a considerable drop
that
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reached 19.55. In 1995 Nuclear was second
less
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used with 6.40
then
in 2005 had a significant increase which reached 10.10. And in 1995 Other was the
most less
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used with 6.40 again in 2005 was the
less
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used with a moderate increase that reached 9.10.
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