The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts ten nations and their use of
electricity
,
along with
how much
electricity
was produced by them in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
,
although
China and the United States are the first and second countries, Germany and Korea are the ninth and tenth countries for using and producing
electricity
in the year given.
To begin
with, China is number one in
this
chart; there was a slight difference between using and creating
electricity
which generated more electric current in 2014. We can see the same result for other countries like the United States, Japan, India, Canada, France, and Brazil,
although
electricity
was created more in the United States than those nations which are given. Korea and Russia had the same production and consumption in the year given.
However
, the only nation in which
electricity
usage was roughly more, was Germany.
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