The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts illustrate five varieties of books and how many of them sold by a bookseller in 1972, 1992 , and 2012 in each year

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think this is the best way to run a business, while others considered this a potential source of problems. Discuss both sides and Give your opinion.

Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.