The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The pie charts illustrate five varieties of books and how many of them sold by a bookseller in 1972, 1992 , and 2012 in each year

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this develoment outweigh the disadvantages?

Some think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros than cons?

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