The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts illustrate five varieties of books and how many of them sold by a bookseller in 1972, 1992 , and 2012 in each year

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause?

Some people think that watching television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Write an essay justifying your choice.

Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?