The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resource in a country in 1985 and 2003.

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manufactured from various sources (oil, natural gas, coal, nuclear, hydro and other renewable) in 1985 and 2003 respectively.

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The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resource in a country in 1985 and 2003.

Q) The Internet is generally considered as a blessing for mankind. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many famous sports players advertise sports products.Do the advantages of this outweighs the disadvantages?

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