The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resource in a country in 1985 and 2003.

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manufactured from various sources (oil, natural gas, coal, nuclear, hydro and other renewable) in 1985 and 2003 respectively.

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The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resource in a country in 1985 and 2003.

Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Every man has a right to proper healthcare. However, private hospitals nowadays are so profit-oriented that they are distracted from providing proper healthcare facilities. In your opinion, is this profit-making tendency a hindrance to proper healthcare ?

You have a full time job and also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue this course. Describe the situation Explain why you can not continue at this time Say what action you would like to take

Some people think that younger people are not suitable for important positions in government. Others think that it will be a good idea for younger people to take on these positions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter apologize for canceling the meeting explain why you couldn't be there suggest an alternative day when you could meet