You have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter: Describe the problem the new employee has caused Explain how other employees about the new employee’s conduct Say how you expect the HR manager to address the situation.

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Dear Mr. Wilson, I am writing to let you know about the problem caused by James, who is our new receptionist. Recently, I observed that he was rude to one of our colleagues when he was asked about the reason he had not transferred a call from a client. Let me explain the situation to you

further

. The incident happened yesterday when James did not forward a client's call to our team, which resulted in us losing time with that client. When my fellow employee questioned him about

this

mistake, he behaved inappropriately and did not clarify the whole scenario to him.

Moreover

, he accused my team member of lying. Would you please address the matter with James regarding the whole situation as it can affect the business and reputation of the company in the market? I suggest assigning him a few training sessions on customer service or maybe shifting him to a different department within the firm. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Robin Mathew

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coherence cohesion

To further improve, ensure each paragraph focuses tightly on a single subject for optimal clarity.

task achievement

Consider giving more details about the impact of the problem and suggestions for resolution to fully address the task.

structure

Effective use of paragraphs to structure the letter.

tone

Appropriate tone for a formal letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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